Sunday, May 22, 2016

Rainbow snippet

An unedited snippet from a manuscript we are working on.
Set in Victorian England. 
Jacob Doone visits London in search of his twin brother. His only lead, a flyer advertising a production of, Dr Faustus, at the Regents Theatre. On the back  his brother had penned. Must see! M, is simply outstanding. Love J.
M, turns out to be Mephistopheles. Played by the enigmatic, Christian DeLaCroix.



Beautiful Deception.

“Did your sire not teach you, never raise your hand to a woman?” Before the man could speak, Christian was at his throat. He sank his fangs into the fleshy neck. His momentum carried their weight to the filthy ground. Christian gorged himself. Weeks had passed since he’d fed so heartily. 


 



6 comments:

  1. What a chivalrous moment of predation! :)=

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  2. Definitely want to see what led up to that. And are there any witnesses to his action?

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  3. Yes, but Mama never told me about the dire consequences! >.<

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    1. He probably didn't listen anyway. Thanks for reading

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