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A young thief, Ethan James, gets more than he bargained for after stealing a priceless relic. He is forced to work with Ash Stephanos, an expert on Egyptian antiquities, to free himself from the grasp of a vindictive ancient God.
This unedited scene takes place in Manny's home. Manny is Ethan's fence, and thinks of Ethan as the son.
Ash didn’t wait for an invitation as he pushed his way
inside and past the recently wakened man. He cast a disapproving glare at
Manny’s disheveled appearance. The blue plaid robe hung open, exposing the worn
t-shirt and baggy gray boxers. “I want it back,” he demanded.
“Well good morning to you too, sunshine.” Manny pulled
his robe together and tied the belt.
“I hire you to do a job and you have the nerve to set
me up as a mark?” Ash shoved Manny into the wall.
“Watch your tone with me boy.” To emphasize his point
Manny pressed the tip of his stiletto to Ash’s groin. “Wouldn’t want me to
think you were threatening me in my own home.” Manny gave a toothy grin.
Ash raised his hands and took a step back. “Your
reputation precedes you. My apologies, sir.” A secondary lapse of concentration
as Manny gave a triumphant smile was all it took. The knife nicked his flesh as
he wrestled it from Manny’s hand then held the blade to Manny’s throat.
“Consider your life collateral old man until my scarab is returned.”
Very interesting.
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DeleteInteresting. I'm curious about him hiring Manny and then being set up.
ReplyDeleteAsh is a man with a purpose. Things aren't always what they appear to be. Thanks for reading.
DeleteI'm thinking Manny had better watch himself more carefully next time.
ReplyDeleteDon't think Manny has ever met anyone quite like Ash before. Thanks for reading
DeleteI like Ash. Intellectual attraction... And he's got guts.
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DeleteVery interesting.
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DeleteInteresting dialogue and interaction between these two!
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